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really nice

+ the intro was a nice beat, good enough that it could have been a little more audible.
+ awesome beat
+ the drums were simple(normally bad) but were perfectly placed to accent the beat. It could have used a bit more druming at parts though
+ the beat was switched up well. you didn't keep one beat the entire way through
- It could have been longer and still enjoyable.
- the end fade out took to long

PERVOK responds:

Thank you for the comments, but the thing about it being short... it that it can't really be long on newgrounds. I think nI'm going to consider making a longer version for other sites though.

And about the end fade out... hey, its what I do. If your stoned, its how you want a song to end :P

Thank you sir, for the review!

sounds pretty good

+ a good FF7 song to begin with
- it sounds ALOT like you ripped the midi and just played with the instruments
+ the metal theme works well with this song
+ there were a few overlayed beats that were good.
- could have used more bass

needs work

- the beat from the beggining was just a sped up version from another song on the AP.
+ you picked a good beat to copy
- the distortion was horrible

ClashCityRocker13 responds:

Yeah I used Pinion from NIN, Burning Flag from Manson and some other stuff.

It's not that great, but Audacity isn't easy to use.

a good beat

+ the intro was really godd
+ it was a good trance beat
- the voice was cool at points, but was a little, um, blurry at points, and the words it was saying really don't fit together well or stay on beat with the song.
+ the parts where it was pure beat were good
- you could have diversified the beat a bit, although it wasn't much of a problem since the focus was on the voice most of the time

How much better can it get

This is one of your best songs to date. great job

+ awesome intro
- the dropoff and rebuild at the end of the intro took a little long.
+ im glad you took AL25's beat because it is really awesome and needed to be redone with your new skills.
+ the variations that the song goes too really add alot to it. the first one is complemented by nice drums, then it evolves into the samething but an octave or two higher. then it goes into the next subbeat which ends well and goes back into the main beat. And the main beat now has that second sub beat underlayed under it.
- the two beats needed there volume to differentiate a bit more, they were clashing a bit, especially on a few notes.
+ the next subbeat, the pulseing solo thing right after the drums, is really good.
+ it goes into something like that at the end.
+ after that you finish it with a piano solo that sounds so perfect.

I hope you get some feature for this or something, becasuse its better then some of the stuff thats getting featured. and while you wait for the recognition to come, MAKE MORE GOOD SONGS!

Ivan-Ether responds:

"I hope you get some feature for this or something, becasuse its better then some of the stuff thats getting featured. and while you wait for the recognition to come, MAKE MORE GOOD SONGS!"

Lol... I want to brag... but I know I shouldn't. Your right about the variation in the drums... Another volume switch on the kick would have been nice.

Beautiful

like Sorrow said, I get kind of a "bad guy terrorizing" feel more then victory. and I agree with him on the whole cello chords making it sound a bit sadder, they can do a good job with that.

now for a little detail from me, somewhat cronologicaly
+ excelent trumpet intro.
+ the triangle ring was a nice end of the intro and introduction into the main beat.
- the drums could have picked up sooner after the ring.
+ nice drum beat.
- everything kinda mixed together. there were moments when I thought some of the instriments should have been more background while others really promient.
+ ending nicely done.
- the fade to silence doesn't really constitute enemy victory any more then it does simple song ending

Distorted

Its a good beat and all, rather short though.

but I just have to say that the synths are way to distorted. they need be be a bit crisper.

theres not mcuh more to say then that

PERVOK responds:

I know, I just decided to submit something. Don't expect me to do any tweaking or finishing of this song.

OK

ok trance mix. kinda uses the same beat to much, and its a pretty generic beat. the voices kinda take something away as well.

the first few seconds sounded very good from a trance point of view. the bass was ok as well.

although you might wanna work on its looping capability. right now it sounds kinda cutoff when it loops.

homer drool

.hack god, thats great. beautiful song.

as VM said, could'a used some mixed bass or drums or something.

I loved the piano though, mixed with the synths it sounds great.

excelent

like you said, its really simple. thats the beauty of it. you used the drums and one or two instument to your advantage and let them capitolize on the beat.

I really think you should make a longer version where the beat evolves into something more complex. maybe?

PERVOK responds:

Hah, thats actually a good idea. I'll see what I can do with that.

Thanks for the review, and the idea :D

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