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[Zenon Sucks at Drums--_--]

Drums aren't your thing

Im going to guess that accually was you trying to play drums, because I don't think that your that bad at making beats in FL6 to come up with this, no offence.

+ it shows effort
- the sound quality wasn't to good
- no clear beat
- overuse of what I think is a highhat

um...ya, drums aren't your thing

PERVOK responds:

Of course there was no clear beat... I said in my comments 'enjoy the cheap SOLO'. A drum solo is simply a show of skill, not of a steady beat :-/

Hi hat? I only used my hi hat for about 20 or 30 secodsout of the whole thing... might wanna check your hearing :P

Drums aren't my thing? I know, but they are fun.

[The Attic--_--(2:11)]

really nice

+ the intro was a nice beat, good enough that it could have been a little more audible.
+ awesome beat
+ the drums were simple(normally bad) but were perfectly placed to accent the beat. It could have used a bit more druming at parts though
+ the beat was switched up well. you didn't keep one beat the entire way through
- It could have been longer and still enjoyable.
- the end fade out took to long

PERVOK responds:

Thank you for the comments, but the thing about it being short... it that it can't really be long on newgrounds. I think nI'm going to consider making a longer version for other sites though.

And about the end fade out... hey, its what I do. If your stoned, its how you want a song to end :P

Thank you sir, for the review!

[Perfect Little Nightmare]

needs work

- the beat from the beggining was just a sped up version from another song on the AP.
+ you picked a good beat to copy
- the distortion was horrible

ClashCityRocker13 responds:

Yeah I used Pinion from NIN, Burning Flag from Manson and some other stuff.

It's not that great, but Audacity isn't easy to use.

[I_E - AL26]

How much better can it get

This is one of your best songs to date. great job

+ awesome intro
- the dropoff and rebuild at the end of the intro took a little long.
+ im glad you took AL25's beat because it is really awesome and needed to be redone with your new skills.
+ the variations that the song goes too really add alot to it. the first one is complemented by nice drums, then it evolves into the samething but an octave or two higher. then it goes into the next subbeat which ends well and goes back into the main beat. And the main beat now has that second sub beat underlayed under it.
- the two beats needed there volume to differentiate a bit more, they were clashing a bit, especially on a few notes.
+ the next subbeat, the pulseing solo thing right after the drums, is really good.
+ it goes into something like that at the end.
+ after that you finish it with a piano solo that sounds so perfect.

I hope you get some feature for this or something, becasuse its better then some of the stuff thats getting featured. and while you wait for the recognition to come, MAKE MORE GOOD SONGS!

Ivan-Ether responds:

"I hope you get some feature for this or something, becasuse its better then some of the stuff thats getting featured. and while you wait for the recognition to come, MAKE MORE GOOD SONGS!"

Lol... I want to brag... but I know I shouldn't. Your right about the variation in the drums... Another volume switch on the kick would have been nice.

[Losing Control--_--LOOP]

Distorted

Its a good beat and all, rather short though.

but I just have to say that the synths are way to distorted. they need be be a bit crisper.

theres not mcuh more to say then that

PERVOK responds:

I know, I just decided to submit something. Don't expect me to do any tweaking or finishing of this song.

[Sticks Crush Bones--_--LOOP]

excelent

like you said, its really simple. thats the beauty of it. you used the drums and one or two instument to your advantage and let them capitolize on the beat.

I really think you should make a longer version where the beat evolves into something more complex. maybe?

PERVOK responds:

Hah, thats actually a good idea. I'll see what I can do with that.

Thanks for the review, and the idea :D

[Unleash the Chains ZENON MIX]

I bow

an awesome song, I hate to say this but its better then Paradise on E.

but don't get me wrong. they are both really excelent songs.

permanent playlist addition zenon, per-man-ent

PERVOK responds:

You should really check out the remix I did of Paradise on E, then :)

Thanks for the review!